Need feedback on business card designs

logos
item-feedback
graphics

#1

Hello Expert,
This is my business card design which got rejected

Please take a look a my design and tell me why it’s got rejected
Thank You !


#2

The typography is the main problem. Not sure if the fonts match too well, and it all looks too crammed in, needs to be spaced better. Plus starting the main “David Smith” part from a different indent to the “address” part, etc, doesn’t work well. Text layouts should be as clean and clear as possible, plus visual hierarchy is very important.


#3

This is brilliant, but you may have to work more on the hierarchy on the information side