Need feedback new template


#1

Please help me improve my template, my first temple soft rejected 3 times without pointing to reason anyway i try to improve my skill and design new theme , i need your suggestions before submitting. please help me if you see anything wrong
Thanks in advance
Demo: http://dizayntim.com/demo/kare/


#2

Sorry but with all due respect you are way off with this.

The fundamentals e.g. typography, spacing, margins, alignment all need a lot of work throughout

Beyond that the design needs a lot of work, updating, code needs to validate and you need to find something very unique/premium if you want to compete in the one page market


#3

Thanks a lot for your answer , i understand about one page market and code validations. I will be happy if you recommend me some documentation about this topics " typography, spacing, margins, alignment "
thanks again


#4

Look on Tuts+ or Google (there are literally thousands of links)

It’s worth familiarizing yourself with some of the standards in big files already for sale

Think attention to detail e.g. (only a few examples)

  • logo and nav do not align to the rest of the page

  • different margins top/bottom of different sections

  • titles like meet the team on blue in Dancing font but only on some sections not each


#5

Thanks a lot charlie4282 i will improve myself before submit any site. And thank you to showing me to direction where to look .


#6

hi .
your template need more work in any aspect


#7

thanks , i will work harder than


#8

Hello charlie 4282, I don’t want to bother you and keeping you busy with my tyro questions but after your recommendation, i try to improve my theme , if you tell me what you are thinking i will be glad

link: http://dizayntim.com/demo/kare/agency.html

Thanks in advance