Need feedback for wordpress theme uploading

I want to submit this theme wordpress in themeforest so please any one suggestion this theme can be qualified for themeforest.and if have any problem as like font combination or color combination or typography etc then pleace tell me.
Thank You all!

This is something you want to covert?

The concept is very very very overdone and you will need to add premium features and functionality and modernise the design and execution generally