Need feedback for new track

Hello everybody!
I created this new track. And I will be grateful for your feedback and recommendations. Is this a commercial quality track? :blush:

Thank you for listening!

Sounds nice.
I would suggest fixing transitions between sections on 0:21 and on 2:34, they sound interrupted. Maybe add another bar and make a smooth tail. Also section B (1:28 to 2:13) is a copy of section A (0:22 to 1:06) with no changes (if I am not mistaken), doesnโ€™t make a lot of sense for library music.
Other than that, I think itโ€™s a good track.
Hope this helps.

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Thank you!