I created this new track. And I will be grateful for your feedback and recommendations. Is this a commercial quality track?
Thank you for listening!
I would suggest fixing transitions between sections on 0:21 and on 2:34, they sound interrupted. Maybe add another bar and make a smooth tail. Also section B (1:28 to 2:13) is a copy of section A (0:22 to 1:06) with no changes (if I am not mistaken), doesn’t make a lot of sense for library music.
Other than that, I think it’s a good track.
Hope this helps.