Need experts help for my soft rejected item MyApp

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Hello Experts, Moderator, Friends,

I got soft rejected for my Landing page item.
Issues that pointed from expert reviewer is:

  1. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY
  2. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT
  3. TYPEFACE
  4. LINE LENGTH

I updated and submitted but again got soft rejeceted:

  1. THE CHANGES ARE NOT ENOUGH: Unfortunately, the changes are not enough and the previous review still stands. Please carefully check your item to make sure all problems were adequately addressed before resubmitting this item.

I believe there are some issues still missing but my eyes not able to find out.
So, please please please take a look using your expert eye and give me the problem/bugs/missing point.

Thanks & Regards

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Hi Experts friends need argent help. Please take a look and advice me.

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Hi @mgscoder,

  1. Try not to use the same font for both titles and body, take a look at these font pairing examples:
    http://fontpair.co/
  2. Put some effort to your body text, don’t use the same standard “Lorem Ipsum” everywhere, there are dozens of generators nowadays,
  3. There are some white, unused spaces on your design that stand out too much,
  4. Please take a look at attached screenshot that will show you some spacing issues:
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    scr.jpg1920Ă—9712 930 KB

Thanks,
Luca

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Hi @lucalogos

Thank you so much for your helpful suggestions.

Regards,
MGScoder

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Hi Experts,

I am waiting for more suggestions. So that I can submit my item with full and final solution.
Please Please take a look my demo and help me to find out my missing issues.

Thanks & Regards