Need advises


My project was rejected( Can you give me some advises ?
Best regards from France

I don’t feel “Happy Autumn” (as you wrote) when I’m looking on this video. It’s looks more like an autumn’s depress :wink: It’s looks a little bit boring. Too static animation. Maybe it’s ok for gently autumn item, but you try make more happy and funn item, so try add more dinamic. Don’t forget about empty spaces between text blocks and edges of the poster. Text blocks are too close to the edges. In fact, the distance between the edge of the video and the text block is the same as the line spacing. It’s one of the biggest mistakes in typography. And font too bad.
Good luck! :wink:

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