Need advices for my rejected track (trailer music)

Hello forum, first of all sorry for my english. A few weeks ago im tried to upload my two trailer-tracks on audiojungle and as a result i get hard rejected on both. I understand its becouse of obvious reasons, so i would like to know your opinion why this tracks was rejected. Give me please your advices how to improve tracks for audiojungle.

Most of your track is fine, actually. I would advise to get to the point sooner and shorten the intro. Also, there is a scream-type synth all over the song, it can be very distracting and maybe the track would work better either without it or with it mixed much lower. Cheers!

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Thanks a lot! I will try to correct tracks as you advise!)