Need advice for logo rejected

again, my submission has been rejected, :sweat_smile: please give me an advice to improve this one. thank you.

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I would say my advice from your other logo also applies here - the dragon fly looks really great, but it’s the typography that can be improved. I don’t like the way you space out the kerning on the slogan. But I think you only need some fairly basic improvements and this will get approved. Good luck!