Need advice before submission! Please!

Hi dear friends! Before submission track I would like to ask your opinion. Does it make sense to upload this track? If yes what needs to be changed or improved? SOrry for bad english! Thank you
here track

Hi there,

nice sound already.

  • The flute sometimes sound a tiny bit off. It might be intentional, but I fear that reviewers might not like this, hehe.
  • The beat starting at around 0:58 min sound a bit weird to me. Maybe you could stay in halftime there like in the end.

I am not sure what else I could write about this piece, since I am also still learning what might work and what not. Good luck, though! :slight_smile:

Oh thank you friend! I will make the changes and improves you said!