My work again rejected. WHY!!!!


#1

why, why, why.???


#2

i think the typography is the main reason


#3

why tipography?


#4

I think that you have to change colors and typography. In general poster is over saturated and design is not look like modern.
Try to play with colors, make it lighter and surely don’t forget about text elements which have to be positioned great and without odds.


#5

u need to fix the saturation and typography and improve the design as well.