Hi everyone. I would like some feedback to understand why my track was rejected and get better in the future. Cheers!
Hello!!! In this video reflective background_EDIT I showed what mistakes in the sound of this track. Since I am not a native English speaker, I can not comment on my actions in this video. I hope you understand. In a few words I will say here. The main mistake in the sound of the track is too much side component from stereo, and not enough mid frequencies. Sorry for my English. Good luck!!!
The synth has some clashing notes, especially when the guitar enters.
Chord progression is A min, F maj, C maj, G maj, and your top note on the piano on the third chord is F, clashing with the chord (C, E, G).
@bobfox Thank you so much for your feedback. I’ll watch and study that video. I really appreciate your effort. You are great!
@ZebraDuo Than you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate that. That F over the C chord was intentional as 11th but that could be a reason. I’ll put more effort nest time. Thank you again!
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Good track! But the market is oversaturated with such music. Draw conclusions.