In my opinion:
1.piano sounds too moody.
2.main instruments is too agressive/ a little no quality sound.
3.maybe to much instruments sounds together/ mix
4. Idea is ok
Hello! Thank you for your comment. It is useful for me
The emotional response I had was a little confusing. Like it wants to sound happy and jolly (I thought that in the beginning because of the claps) but at the same time it has an inspirational and motivational feeling. You don’t know where its going. Its important that the music evokes a clear emotional response. I hope it helps.
Thanks for your feedback. Yes, I think I should work on the mood of the track, make it more commercially suitable