hi Jeri
well for typography hierarchy indeed, this is not hard to understand , they feel like that hierarchy of the information is suitable yet, this means that u have to focus on main info and make them pop up and make sure that the most important titles are the most visible and outstanding and that secondary information is progressively getting “flatter” so to speak until the focus is on main issues
for spacing and alignment, u have to make sure that all texts are flagged and aligned in the very same way, this is the alignment part … for the spacing part u have to make sure that u do not have strange gaps, i mean uneven gaps between two elements (for instance a title and the following description) and another block of title and the following description , i could see only from the preview that u have some issue about this for instance
the good thing is that u are soft rejected in other words u can very well make it with your template, u just need to make sure that u take recommendations into account …
Look in the portfolio image grid section and the video section, the section padding doesn’t look the same at the top and at the bottom. There are small details here and there but this can be approved. However, I don’t like the main color, it gives a poor contrast and you should use shite buttons on this, not red. Also try to refine the shapes in the background. Vary type, position, rotation and size. Good luck.
Could you please reduce the transparency or chose the lighter grey color for those “grey” circles? also reduce the size of the bigger one? and see how the result
Well for me, these distracting the focus of your content and break your template’s visual hierarchy,