This is definitely an improvement, however much of the smaller text still needs improvement. Some of the body text is blurry. Focus on improving the font weights from headers to body (some of the smaller text appears too heavy) and improving the line height.
Hi JeriTeam,
This is a nice template in general,
but like the reviewer said : you have to improve your text apperance, add the gray color in subtitles, try to add some space between lines (I mean line-height), it’s important to give your template some breathing space, most of templates are rejected because of margin and padding
The color in Newsletter subtitle is not the same as the rest of other subtitles.
Good luck my friend