My new song do you think about it?

Here is just finished my new track to present to audiojungle.
Since it is time now that I can not get myself approved of a song I would like your sincere oppression on it. Please be ruthless.Give me also useful technical advice

Great track @Floriansound! Mix wise, you could maybe pull the drums back and tad and bring the rhythm guitar up slightly. Good luck!!

Thanks for the advice, I also thought the same thing … if you can tell me more, the guitars how could I fix them? and does the sound sensation seem sufficient to you for audiojungle or does it sound soft? Thanks so much !