My new projects give me any * idea and critict *

Tell me whats good and bad

THIS WORK IS 30%

thank you

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Iā€™m not a webdesigner but I think this is too simple to be a template.

its just begining bro
thank you

Well I dont get it why you want actually a feedback on a 30% completed design. Probably nobody gets it. Just keep doing it till 100% done. Then show us.

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Typography is very bad.
The design is very common. Try something new.
Good Luck !