My Music was Rejected by Envato. Please Tear it Apart!

I’m a long time composer for artists, but very new to composing for media. This is my second attempt at created a music indent only for it to be rejected again. I was going for a 80’s inspired intro indent/logo.

I have no idea what to do. I use Ozone and other Izotope tools for mixing/mastering. But i’m still relatively new to mixing and mastering for commercial use.

I would be grateful for any advice I can get. It would be nice to have a track accepted even if nobody buys it.

sounds pretty good to me .I find it easier to get mmy idents through as music tracks review is tough.

Iwould try electronica with a good melody hook

Hello!!! In this video retro_tv_intro_EQ I tried to find your mistakes in the track (since I don’t speak English, I can’t comment on what’s going on in this video. I hope you understand what’s going on there). In a nutshell, it’s equalization and mid-side. Good luck!!!