My logo template was rejected

Please anyone tell why this Logo template is rejected & please highlight my faults.


hi there are several things to say. First of all i think that the logo lacks impact because of the lack of colors, in the first place. Then, afterwards , i think that the relief that u made u in the eyes in not subtle enough , i guess that changing the color of lowering the opacity would give a smoother result, more interesting visually. Then, the typo is clean but to be honest with this is also flat, this is clacking of variations, font combination and touches of originality , not to mention that the text and illustration part are not completely properly imbricated at the moment and this contributes to emphasize a discrepancy in terms of style between the very straight typo and the much more curvy illustration …