My logo rejected, give advice?

hi everyone, i need an advice because i am new here. I made this logo but it has been rejected. Can you please tell me what can be improve?

Hi! :slight_smile: You should show your rejected item if you want someone to help you

ok thank you

how i can download picture

Le mar. 8 oct. 2019 à 11:07, romlam via Envato Forums envato@discoursemail.com a écrit :