I think the “stuttery” hihat (thas goes 1/64ths) is not doing well on the song’s image.
I would remove that.
Also the break in the 1:07, it suddently too intense, also the snare, I would do that more calm.
Also try not to be so repetitive, try to not repeat so much every sound, in the ending you could change the chords stabs with some other sound.
And most important, don’t do a fade out at the ending!
Overall a nice song! It could be resubmitted I think with these changes.