I think the track is so flat. You can make it more contrast. I couldn’t see the different between your verse and the hook quite a lot. The track can end at the second hook. I love the ending hook. You can use it for main hook.
Overall, your idea is good. Try to make it more contrast friend. Hope it help you.
Thanks a lot, i think i understand what you mean!
Hi, flat sound agree with @LongXmusic , and claps I did not like (sound squishing), piano too electronic and squeaky (No approach to the pit) that solos and unexpected pit 1: 57 (it is not an approach), and the tool change also seemed unexpected (acoustic guitar and palm mute)
Спасибо за совет. Учту!