I'm new here also and am still learning a lot about what they're looking for, having said that heres some feedback!
The one thing that sticks out to me is the synthy strings. I think they are a little distracting, particularly at the start of the track when you also have the nice melody with the bells happening. I felt they were really competing for the listeners attention.
Maybe have the strings come in right around the 20 second mark instead? I took a listen on my mains and a pair of headphones and I think they could sit a little better in the mix too.
Outside of that, not a bad track however as I understand there seem to be more rejections as of lately for various reasons.