My flyer pizza is ok or not?

Hi all authors:


My flyer is ok or not? please help me thank you so much.


please help me, I need submit graphicriver thanks.

hi jeri, no doubt that you did your best but quite frankly if u ask me there is a whole lot of things to improve indeed … first of all, the typo is very flat , the hierarchy of information , too , not to mention that the readability is far from ok actually as color changing prevent people from reading easily , u should drop some shadows behind the pizza so that it looks more realistic and veggies spread around are indeed placed in avery strange way u should spread them around the pizza and make sure that u have an harmonious organization of elements in both sides of the pizza