My first logo

tips-and-tricks

#1

Hello,
I would like to present my first as an intro logos and’m a little lost on that label put, as well as what kind of title would fit for a good presentation.
If tubieran kindly give me your opinion, I facilitated the link of one of the logos in question. I have another one very similar.
Any suggestions are welcome!
Thank you!

https://soundcloud.com/jordi-tanya/modern-logo-1