Hi
I would like to welcome all of you. This is my first post and the beginning of the stock audio adventure. I am very exited because till this moment I have never public my work. My only experience is to have fun with and audio software and play with thousands of functions, edit possibilities etc. I never make any “song” or a a “piece” from the beginning to an end, always make only a few second of music to edit - and this part was a biggest fun for me. Experiment with effects, blending sounds together, discovering a software functionality - that was my world. Now I have decided to make something new. But it has failed - reviewer reject my debut 
after few days of thinking I decided to try once more. Please help me with that. I believe I am not the only one that have been rejected. Please listen and send your opinion about my music and some technical advices ?
thanks in advance 
I think it sound good (on my phone anyway). A couple of things that could cause a rejection is the piano at 30 sec, which is repeated later. Its to loud and to dry in my opinion and not a very good sound. Another thing is the fade out. Fade outs should be avoided. Hope this helps!
Hi @Epiano In my opinion , you have two songs in one drum only amped one party held , the track is good in principle , but I think it noncommercial music, just because of this and probably rejected .
I don’t see why this wouldn’t have commercial value. It doesn’t have to have reversed cymbals and piano and the 4 familiar chords to be commercial. I think this track has a House of Cards vibe and sounds cool.
Thanks for your comments. It’s great to hear that it’s not bad My idea was to make something very characteristic, that could be used in advertisement for example and make a special busy and fine mood. Maybe it’s to strange and doesn’t meet requirements for the commercial media and commercial scheme. However I hope my new track will sound better for me and for the AJ once more great to hear your opinion - thanks !
BTW I realy admire authors here and they work. This is real school of making music for media. Congratulations for all of you, maybe one day there will be a place for me too
I agree with @Hyperprod. Piano and fade out is not good. I suggest you to listen jazz top tracks and create another arrangement of this song. I think this idea have commercial potencial and can be arranged for Aj. Good luck!
Thank You very much, unfirtunately I cant improve this particular track - I have only this exported version as a wave file. But definitely want to do the next one maybe more commercial (corporate, motovational, inspiring) 
and I will publish it here first. Once more thank You very much.
OK,
this is my new track to review:
comment please
thanks
nice I like it )))
Thank You again @WildLion_Production I really appreciate your nice words. Could You please explain your opinion about my first piece ? I’m not sure what did You meant about the drums and two songs ? Can You ? Thanks in advice
Piano sounds too hard, try to put down the velocity down and put some reverb on it. Also, fade out is unnecessary to be that long. I pretty much like the saxophone, sounds cool to me.
Good luck!
Thanks @RainyAudio ! No fadeouts allowed here I agree that maybe for commercial purpose the classic ending is better. And my poor piano 
Next time I will analyze it deeeper. I hardly know where is the saxophone You have mentioned I think You probably meant a trumpet ? Anyway - thanks again for your attention and for nice words
Dear Epiano,
I hear static on the track.
Could that be part of the reason?
Thank you for posting your discussion, as it brought forth a wealth of information.
Oh, yeah, I liked the music. Very easy listen.
thanks @HeyGirl - I think this could be a reason but my idea was not to create a dynamic development with big climax and fireworks, only to discreetly put some good mood Thank you for nice words.
the first track may have the potential Comercial , i like the drums there, but reviewer other requirement, I think you need to change the melody and piano breaks too )))) Second is very nice for this genre )))
The atmosphere at the track is very good. I liked the intro and especially the bass line. But I think you need to reconsider the track arrangement. Each new melody, which appears in the track, brings a lack of discipline, I would like to hear a smoother track. Good luck !!!
thanks @HeartDrumMachine - you are absolutely right - more discipline in arrangement. Good point. Thank you greetings
Yes, I’m sorry. I listened to two songs so saxophone from other songs got to my ears. 