My design personal portfolio is ok homepage or yet not?

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Hi to all:

@unlockdesign

Maybe I think that my design is too generic :’( please help me thank you so much, regards.

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design is looking good but typography and color combination destroy your template i think must be getting rejected.

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Just my personal opinion:

  1. header menu style can be updated
  2. header banner play button play text can be removed
  3. you have used both light color orange light is fine but you can think another one is some dark
  4. typography must need to update
  5. My Profile (right box) you have used all font bold. looking odd, you can make heading bold but text normal as like this:
    Name: Isaac Smith
  6. My Profile (right box) social icons can be left allign
  7. Contcat you have used all font bold. looking odd, you can make heading bold but text normal
  8. Contcat social icons can be left allign
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Thank you so much to @unlockdesign for help me again.

Thank you so much to @mgscoder for your information some error my design psd but now I am fixing some my psd regards.

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@unlockdesign @mgscoder

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it’s ok?

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much better but right side menu can be hidden and will open onclick menu bar. In contact form Message Me! in 1 line how will look!
In Clients section you can add designation of the client as like CEO at jeritec ltd.

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@mgscoder

I don’t understand this

This want add below of name people in clients section?

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you wrote:

Charles James

I would prefer:
Charles James
CEO at jeritec ltd.

here CEO at jeritec ltd. just a designation, you can write as you like.

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Yesssss now I understand u thank you :slight_smile:

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Don’t use “magic wand”, use “Polygonal Lasso” to cut out the silhouette of the person. You will spend 2 minutes more of your time, but the person will have a neat silhouette. Now silhouette looks very bad

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Thank you so much :slight_smile:

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@mgscoder

@unlockdesign

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all my pages are ok or not? I need submit themeforest now thank you so much.

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  1. as I wrote:
    CEO at jeritec ltd.
    should be normal not bold because both Name and designation bold with same font size is typogrphy issue.
  2. Name: Isaac Smith
    10px space will be better between Name: & Isaac Smith
  3. Blog Standard page in Recent News
    News Title bold and meta data (date) can be normal
  4. Blog Standard page pagination:
    Current page should be highlighted
  5. Blog Details page in Recent News
    News Title bold and meta data (date) can be normal
  6. Blog Details page in comments:
    10px space will be better between Name: & designation
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Color combination still need improvement.

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which color I can add?