my design hard rejected need suggestions and feedback


#1

http://bit.ly/1LH2sTH


#2

Typography needs a lot of work

Many inconsistencies in spacing, alignment, padding

does not really feel premium

is this it - one page?


#3

yes is this too short do i have to include more psd?


#4

hi, for me , u most importantly have trouble with alignments and honestly , this doesn’t look very origin in my view, on the other hand, this is also what happens with the great majority of themes nowadays, days of creative design in the internet are gone for long with this overwhelming flow of portal like sites …;