I’m not an expert but personally I don’t like the fonts, the shadow under the slogan and that texture.
Overall I feel like it’s very simple and it lacks details a little bit.
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hi , indeed, i don’t really know how to say … i am conscious that u have probably made a real effort on this one and that it took u some time, but there’s still a long way for you to go before u manage to have this item approved … . u have real issues when it comes to fonts and font combinations , u have some balance issued as well. The “fake” logo that u are using for the preview looks not good at all and thus provides people with a bad feeling as regard to the quality of your item. You also have to embetter text positioning and alignments as well , so do not discourage , just keep on working and doing your best
u are welcome , u have a positive attitude in asking and considering other people 's view , i just hope that u make the most of it and can take your game to the next level and ultimately get rid of rejections