Anyone can do this without any design experience.
hi , indeed, there are many issues for this to be hard rejected
1- graphic work
u did not put much into it … all people knowing photoshop can redo this
2- weak commercial potential
as people could do easily and quickly the same, why buying?
3- the “fake logo” is not convincing enough for your card to look attractive and push people into buying
4- hierarchy issue
the function is cleary not outstanding
5- typo
you need to combine more, put more effort a bit into it and introduce some originality if possible, this is common at this stage. I think that the only combination u did between jonathan and doe is not working well
6- to have such an empty a-side or b-side i do not understand why it would require 2 sides indeed
Thanks for your comment.
Thanks for your comment n2n44