My audio item has been rejected. I need your opinion and help!

My audio item has been rejected. I need your opinion and help! Sorry for my inglish!

the reasons for the rejected track are not important. in the same way u continue production. a referee who will like the track will of course. i hope :blush:

thanks! I hope! I understand that I need to learn everything and just do it further. Sorry, I don’t know how to add this track here.