Music rejected, help with feedback

Hello my song was rejected and i liked of feed about the song.

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Hello! In my opinion, your staccato strings seem to move away from the general tempo of the track and sound a little crooked, also I think that you need to develop the track faster (a very long introduction). But since you uploaded only part of the track, I can’t hear what happened next … Try to listen to the top tracks in the same genre.
Good luck!

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