Music hard rejected after rework! Need advice

music

#1

I have these two orchestral hybrid music pieces which got hard rejected again after I have reworked them.

You can listen to them here: https://youtu.be/yNaSoMTdu6E
https://youtu.be/_8c1DwdoW1I

Can anyone please give me some advise why they are still hard rejected.

Thank you so much for your help.