Looking for help / feedback on soft-rejected item.

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#1

Hello, my html template Nixo got soft refected and I would really appreciate some feedback.
Here is a preview of my template.

Here are some issues from the review team that i would like some help / constructive criticism on:

  1. VISUAL HIERARCHY: The visual hierarchy of this item requires additional work. Focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the design.

  2. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work.

  3. SPACING ISSUES: Many of the elements in the template are not aesthetically spaced.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Regards
Alex Hara (atypicalthemes)


#2

good luck for your soft rejected. regards.


#3

It’s a VERY crowded category and you really need to find soemhting which makes it stand out a bit

  • Sections rather flow into one another and lack definition or purpose. (that’s what the reviewer is referencing in hierarchy and spacing)

  • Consider alternative background styles/colours etc.to break out features

  • Think about different text layouts on the hero slider as well as different backgrounds

  • Portfolio hover copy is hard to read maybe use solid BG colour

  • Not a fan of the typography in the testimonials (bold looks v brash)

  • Client logos feel cramped below the work items and undefined

  • Address below the map feels very lost and mis-placed


#4

Thank You!


#5

Thank you for the feedback, can you elaborate on what you mean by different backgrounds for the hero slider?

Thanks


#6

You use video, image, slider etc as demos butnin each one the headline copy etc is always in the same place.

Mixing it up a bit on different demos adds extra versatility to the file


#7

Ah i see what you mean. Thanks!


#8

Please refer templates here: https://themeforest.net/category/site-templates

Typographic and spacing need to improve, fast way is you need to hire a designer to help you improve it.

Good luck!
Tommy