Looking for feedback on rejected corporate style tune

Hi AudioJungle community,
I’m new at Corporate Advertising style music creation, and used a couple of high sale examples here at AJ as reference tracks. Got the standard hard reject, “not commercial” response. Would really appreciate any feedback on this track since I want to start getting more acceptances here! Thanks.
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Hmmm…not sure really, seems like a usable track. I don’t believe it’s production/mixing related.

Production and mixing is good. What stood out for me was the “slow attack” synth that comes on beat 3 of every bar, sounds like it’s playing a bit earlier than the beat and could be off putting to some.

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Thank you for the feedback!