Looking for approval advice

Hello bros and sis. Could You listen to my music and tell me what is wrong with this ? Link below : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OWJLkqmKefGTJRX2MoTLZUikyblww7-5/view?usp=drivesdk

Thanks for any reply

Hi, listening to your track, two things immediately jump at me: the piano sound is a bit too agressive to my taste, and too fake, too robotic, everything played with same volume.
And then, the melody is short, and repeating continuously… ok you make other changes, but the main pattern is really short and gets boring and even annoying very fast…

This is just my opinion though.

Thx for your reply frozenjazz. Indeed this is very experimental track. Maybe it is too ‘easy’ track. As we know that AJ needs not too ‘difficult’.

agree with everything @frozenjazz said. Piano very “fake” sounding, and the melody / idea isn’t strong enough to repeat that many times!

Thank you guys. I’ll try to make some changes.