Looking for advice with hard reject

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#1

Hello, friends!
I got hard reject with a new track and I am looking for your advice and opinion!

After a detailed hearing I think that palm muted and dist guitars doesn’t fit the song and what do you think?
Thank you!

#2

I agree.

Also

  • I can hear some dissonance starting from 1:23
  • I think piano is overcompressed, it needs more dynamics