hi for me the concept is not working that much and i would recommend not to cut the logo like this with two pieces which look not making an harmony in the end … plus i think taht your typo is not matching with the design and that some of the colors for teh preview are not really attractive and giving people avaluing your product either for teh reviewers or for potential buyers …
u have to identify that the logo category is a very tough one and that there are tons of rejections there and that here typo and typo combinations are much of an issue …