This is two of my work, and they all are rejected.
Pplease gift your advice to my work and me to be better
Tks
hi where are the concerned 2 logos? i see only one … as for the logo , this is globally decent in my view but the typo part is really really plain and this is lacking of everything , starting with relief and inch , in my view. I guess that adding some variations, font combinations and possibly some touches of originality would not hurt and would really bring something more to the table. As for me u have a real issue of imbrication otherwise, as the positioning of separated elements is far from great. At the moment, all the elements look hardly connected to say the least , they rather look like being pasted right next to each other rather than being a part of a whole, not to mention that i see nothing inspiring a sort of continuity in terms of shapes between the illustration and the text parts. I am also not sure , as it maybe due to the mockup indeed, but i have the feeling that all elements are not really aligned well. If so this would be a major mistake as this is a basic design principle (but once again, maybe this is just a feeling resulting from the mockup)