Logo hard-rejected - need feedback

Hi, I would really appreciate feedback about logo template.
Here you can take a look at it: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_k7grYczBaVdEh0QnR1WjZNNkE/view.
I’d like any feedback, but I encourage you to also give me a review in following areas:
This is form about logo feedback - Simple (DO streamline your design. DON’T overcomplicate things): 6/10

  • Distinct (DO set yourself apart. DON’T look just like the competition): x/10
  • Versatile (DO consider various applications. DON’T design for just one size or medium): x/10
  • Appropriate (DO think about your industry. DON’T feel the need to be obvious): x/10
  • Targeted (DO design for your intended audience. DON’T forget the customer): x/10
  • Memorable (DON’T be forgettable. DO leave an impression): x/10
  • Timeless (DON’T be too trendy. DO aim for longevity): x8/10

hi, that’s something much asked by authors but there’s no time for review teams to dedicate to this …

Well, if they don’t have time, then there should be option to pay, lets say 3-5$ for a feedback.
Or they can hire more people, if they can’t pay them, then hire interns or something similar.