I’m sure this will be a rejection.
- The icon is misleading and hard to understand.
- Typography is disconnected and doesn’t support the icon and concept
- You have issues with alignments.
hi buddy sorry to say just this but I have no idea of what this is supposed to be all about in terms of concept and at the same time of whom this is actually addressing to … I guess but I am really not sure that this is a chicken related theme but honestly it took me a good while to come to this conclusion so to speak … Otherwise, once again , I believe that there is a good gap between the very rounded typo and the far less illustration and what’s in my mind is that there should have been much better illustration - typo combinations to do indeed. Besides, once again there is also a discrepancy between the color of text and the illustration and what I can say is that depending on which we are considering first , we can say that the other one is coming completely out of the blue … the alignment and spacing not great in the hoprizontal version, if u ask me