Kind people, please help me

Kind people, please help me, I’m new, I got tens of deviations, but not as I do not understand the reason, I may be doing something wrong, but I do not know what … exactly who can help me answer please, here is one of the examples of the logo, …

logo contains
.ai (illustrator CC)
.eps,eps8, eps10 (illustrator)
.jpg (white background)
.png (transparent background)


Full vectors
100% editable and scalable
Editable colors
CMYK colors
Free fonts
Fonts - Arista
Link to fonts

Logo should be more laconic. There are many details in your logo. The flattened text always looks unprofessional. All elements too close to the edges. Presentation looks not tasteful. Logo should be placed on the business card, and other mockups