Keen to hear your thoughts!

Hey guys so I m working on a next item and I have some results here,

everything is made inside of AE and with element 3d, no prerendered scenes and every object is made inside element alone so everything is completely modular.

Because this is meant to be in the titles category, any advice on how to make this better for the market.
I tried 3d letters but that just don’t work here.

And I m thinking about usability for a customer, so you CAN change everything but most of the peeps who will buy this would change only text so maybe some advice on how to improve the overall usability of this future item.

And what do you think will this be approved once finished?
Thanks for your feedback.

here is the test render

and some pics