Jazzy funk track rejected... Any tips?

At first I’d try to mix differently what you already have, for snare or kick you can layer sample, it would be not hard to do for this track. In general now I try not to use vst drums for a maximum live effect. Look for example to Loop Loft drums. They have lot of good stuff. Also rhodes piano try to move lover for piano melodies clarity.

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Hi guys,

this is my last version of this track, rejected some hours ago. I tried to find your tips, but I don’t understand what are the problems in this track: the composition, the sound, mixing/mastering?
Any feedback is appreciated, thank you so much!

Hey, just browsing through the forum, and listening to the track again.
Well, I have consumer headphones, but, the snare is still a problem to my ears…

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Thank you frozenjazz, in your opinion, the problem is the sound or the volume of the snare?

Thank you so much! :slight_smile:

It still sounds a bit “thin”, without much “body”, at least, to my ears, and with this consumer pair of headphones I am using right now.

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Thanks, very kind! :slight_smile: