it's good enough to be accepted?

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#1

Hey, Expert fellow authors,
Please help me with your feedback or suggestions that might help me to improve my work.
it’s good enough to be accepted? i mean i try to upload another file and i got rejected so?
i want your opinion it’s does not matter if your opinion is good or bad, i just want to know my mistake.


#2

I think that accepted it but I not am sure, good work and good luck :slight_smile:


#3

That’s a very tough category to get accepted into and I don’t think your design is far enough above average to get accepted, sorry.

The right side needs work - it feels cluttered to me… line height not big enough, text size shouldn’t vary, not enough spacing…

Good concept but I’d say definitely keep working on it. :slight_smile:
Also if you keep getting rejected in that category I would search for a different category to make designs for; business cards is seriously hard to get accepted into, they don’t take new submissions anymore unless it’s superior to the existing items.


#4

Thank you i really appreaciate your opinion i will try to fix the right side.
and i will try to large some space for text. and the font by the way what font to you think it’s good for this concept?

anyway thank you.


#5

i think needs some fix, plus some redesign anyway, thank you for your opinion i appriciate. :slight_smile: