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Trying to get approval but have been rejected 2 times. I was working on this project hard to create something unique but still rejected

Please help if I am doing things right?

I beleive some of you has enough experience and will give good comments.

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hi, sorry to say just that, but for me , it doesn’t work so well, there’s a bit of a matter of harmony and u have issues with the texts that are a bit hard to read and not necessarily organized as expected , but the basis is nice

I think still you need to focus more on typography, spaces and other staff …good luck

Your design seems old. This kind of flyers were a success a few years ago, but the new design trends are very different. Study the new design from 2015-2016 and improve your project.