Item has been rejected. Please help!


#1

Hi guys. This is my track that was rejected. Could you please tell me what can be wrong with it? Thank you for any help!

  1. 0:00-2:39 (main)
  2. 2:40-6:48 (metal version)
  3. 6:49-8:18 (short)
    https://soundcloud.com/user-19033946/when-even-angels-cry

#2

Hi Alexander,

First of all, great track! I really dig the idea, the buildup and the sound.
The compressor/limiter could be a bit too loud on the masterbus perhaps? I cant really judge that though as i have a cold.

The thing that sticks out to me the most is at 1:33 when the strings play a note, and a stinger/riser comes in that is completely fighting with the strings/violin at that moment… fighting for EQ, for space in the track, and it is sort of a dissonance and it just sounds ugly for such a beautiful track… that is more something a horror track could use :wink:


#3

Thanks for your feedback :slight_smile: