Hello!
Here is my latest Corporate track.
This track I made after almost 1 year.
I would love to have some initial feedback so that I can improve this track.
Please help me by providing your honest thoughts on this and I really appreciate it.
Thanks.
Good morning,
Great job!
I would come up with a second lead melody to alternate with the one you have already. Some of the high-frequency percussions come off just a touch too loud/harsh. Finally, the bass line could use some work, make it a little more rhythmic, also when it get’s to D major there’s an awkward gap.
You’re not far off!
Best,
Nathan
Thank you @iwritemusic for your honest feedback. As you mentioned I’ll try to fix those thing and will add some variations to the lead melody. Your feedback encouraged me a lot. Thanks you again.