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Hello!

Here is my latest Corporate track.

This track I made after almost 1 year.

I would love to have some initial feedback so that I can improve this track.

Please help me by providing your honest thoughts on this and I really appreciate it.

Thanks.

Good morning,

Great job!

I would come up with a second lead melody to alternate with the one you have already. Some of the high-frequency percussions come off just a touch too loud/harsh. Finally, the bass line could use some work, make it a little more rhythmic, also when it get’s to D major there’s an awkward gap.

You’re not far off!

Best,

Nathan

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Thank you @iwritemusic for your honest feedback. As you mentioned I’ll try to fix those thing and will add some variations to the lead melody. Your feedback encouraged me a lot. Thanks you again.