The principle may only need to replace the kick !)
Most likely suitable)
I changed the kick and some processing in the track. Tell me your opinion, please.
Hey , now is better , but you need a kick to make a slightly quieter volume ! quite a bit , a little bit !)
but the principle very well !))) 
Thank you very much! Today I wrote another track. Tell me what you think about it, please 
Not bad !))) You have a talent !!! but I think a little prolonged , and this is due to the fact that all the monotonous , and make the end is abrupt , make it smoothly-steep !)
Thank you very much for your support. I want to learn how to make good music for AJ. Your opinion is important to me
Hi, I think too monotonous, the beginning is normal, but the middle of the mess, very obtrusive sound.
A new version of the track. Tell me what you think about it.
The old version