rejected!!
can anyone explain why?
hi let’s say that this is ok , but here is where the big dogs play … and u are in a very saturated market in other words, u cannot just do fine … u need beautiful and original things to have a chance to make it … what u have here is not bad but u have a few issues as regard to alignment or disposition to fix , as well as contrast between some graphic elements and background to modify and u most importantly need to strengthen the hierarchy and one of the ways is to give the logo some position where this is not lost in the corner, hardly contrasting from the background and not bieing big ir whatever just what u have right now …
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thanks. about logo can you explain a bit more 
hi the logo does not pop out from the background … u have to figure out that this is an important item and it has to be seen , so it must contrast from the background in terms of colors, at this stage what u have has a rather negative impact on the hierarchy of information …
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ok I’ll try my best 
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no do not try , do it lol
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