Does it have some chance?
Hi.A bit too minimalist in my opinion.The structure is too static, too.Some chord progression and dynamic developement, and some discreet theme would not hurt.Cheers.
thnx
no, I am sorry it does not.
weird start with many confusing elements that immediately, later on, they change to something different, you should make it more coherent, don’t introduce so many different elements especially at intro
this is not so commercial value track
you have to have a theme on your song and tell a story, this does not tells a story
thanks for comment
make it more like a club song , more commercial. and not so repetitive